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Critique by *Aaron-Mayhem Nov 25, 2009, 4:52:23 PM
I havent critiqued anyone since I have got back to deviantart, then I see that you requested it on this one. Honestly its kind of fun to look at your art again, since its been such a long time since I have seen anything by you (think over a year I was gone).
You have grown quite a lot as an artist over the time I have known you.
Artistic Basics, you have improved a lot. You give more detail now then you did in the past. You draw things much more in perspective now then you did before. Taking into account for angles and everything. I do wish I could see something done by you that pushes how much detail you put into your artwork. In this piece I think you should have taken into account her lil fluff on her chest and how it effects the necklace on it.
I think you if you did more with coloring your artwork would appear on the front page a lot. Its lacking compared to how well I think you could do it. If you need any links to tutorials or advice about it let me know.
Love your style! Now you were never lacking since I knew you and your character in that sense, but somehow you are improving on that too. Fashion sense and just showing personality in your character has always been a joy to see in your art. Actually I think that was the reason back when I first found your page that I kept coming back. Even to the point before ever talking to you at all I even did two sketch pages of your character.
My Ratings on this, Now if I gave you 5's across the board it would be of no help to you at all. I dont think anyone should actually be a five.

Redoing for your new account >^.^<